Audience Feedback

I asked a group of 3 people that represent the target audience how i could improve each magazine draft.
The following are the improvements that i was told could be made:
Cover

 -Add the date - no date on the cover
 -Add website address on cover too
 -make the puff "Free pullout poster" larger

Contents















 -Too much blank space on right page
 -Top left image too dull/not colourful enough
 -The lines between the images need to be thicker-define boundaries between each better

DPS

 -"contents"on the top bar needs to be changed
 -pull quote on right page needs to be more defined/bolder
 -photo credits should be made smaller and put on inside of page

I also asked more specific questions about each page and got video feedback from 3 different people.
Questions:
Cover-
1. Is the colour scheme too varied?
2. What does the Masthead connote?
3. Is there too few coverlines?
Contents-
1. Is there too little contents on the contents page?
2. Is the colour scheme consistent?
DPS-
1. Should the page numbers be on the bottom as traditional magazines do?
2. Do the fonts fit the style of the magazine?